Sunday, October 20, 2013

Extra Poems 2

I wrote these two poems a while ago. The first one can be interpreted as the subject being God, but I normally don't think of it that way. The second one is just a poem I wrote for the people who feel down about their "loneliness".

A Picture

A picture in the sky, way above my head
Beauty there lies, quite enough said
A white ball of fluff all year round
Not one whisper, not one hint of a sound
Yet it may turn gray and make the heavens roar
Light shoots across the sky more and more
Scared you may be but there's nothing to fear
'cause that white ball of fluff hangs over you near

To Shine

How wonderful it must be to shine
Shine just like a star
For people to acknowledge you
To know who and what you are
To know you come in groups and clusters
No, you're not alone
For you to have a billion friends
Yes, you're not alone
People will come to acknowledge
Though you're close yet far (No, you're not alone)
People will come to acknowledge
For who and what you are (Yes, you're not alone)

Again, I'm pretty pleased with my poems. I'm actually wondering if I write too many of them. I don't feel like a poet, so I don't know why I write them. I guess poems are just easier to write than short stories because they don't need a plot. And they're easy to end. Anyway, thank you for reading this post <3

My Sketch of Desna (LoK)


This is one of my drawings that I've done. I said that I was an artist and that I liked anime-style art as well. This is a sketch of Desna from the Avatar: The Last Airbender's sequel, Legend of Korra. This was drawn before the actual series premiered.
As you can see, this is not what the actual picture looks like. It's been edited with my photo editor, PicsArt on Android. I used cross process to give it the bluish color and saturated it. I used contrast on it but not too much. I've also used hi-def resolution on it because I tend to draw really lightly, and I couldn't see much of it in the original pic. Part of the pic is blurred (where his hair is) because I used a focal zoom to concentrate on his face. And lastly, I added the artistic design the editor provided me (the purplish....things.....on the edges).
Oddly, I think I'm more satisfied with the photo than I am with the actual sketch. I hope you like it.

Saturday, October 19, 2013

Extra Poems

I've never been kissed before but I decided to write this poem.

My First Kiss

Amazing, it was!
My mind was high,
High above the clouds.
And my stomach fluttered,
The cocoons have hatched.
My heart raced
To the finish line.
And it keeps going!
My lips warmed
By his touch.
We were the only
Two people there,
Stranded on a deserted planet
In a whole 'nother galaxy,
A whole 'nother universe.

This poem is a simple poem I wrote. It was supposed to give me inspiration for a short story but I had never gotten to it.

Enlightenment

Here, under the stars and the moon
Guided by their light,
I lift my soul to the heavens
And I am given sight

From the Heart

From the Heart

Poems from the heart
Don't come easy to me
I try and I try
For my words to just be
The rhythm doesn't flow
And the words don't come
Just a few more words
And I could be done
But I'll keep on going
Till content I will be
'Cause I need to express myself
Yet it drives me crazy
Think, La, think
And finish this piece
But I can't find words
But “to be or not to be"

God's World

This is a poem I had written last year. I'm Catholic but I could never call myself religious. I'm actually one to argue about the Bible and God, but that doesn't mean I don't have my beliefs about it. I do believe in God but I am a defender of many religions.
I quote Muhammad Ali: "Rivers, ponds, lakes and streams--they all have different names, but they all contain water. Just like religions do--they all contain truths." Many religions, I'll admit, are weird in a way, but I really like learning about them nonetheless. Religion makes a person, whether they believe in God(s) or not. This doesn't mean I don't like to debate though. I accept beliefs but love to think things over.
The poem I wrote is almost like freestyle rhyming (i like to call it that at least); it doesn't necessarily follow a pattern, but most of it still rhymes. It deals with God's perfection and the sinners who aren't redeemed or saved. I refuse to believe that there is anything but Heaven and purgatory. I believe God is a merciful god who maintains His ever-benevolent ways. I do not intend to make fun of the Bible; this was just me criticizing my family's mixed views about God being ever-benevolent only when you are alive, and certainly not after death despite ever-benevolent meaning eternally forgiving.

God's World

I live in a neutral place
Where good and bitter tastes
Lies in every heart
I live on a neutral land
Where good and bad go hand and hand
Where fear is everywhere,
Where nature and I do part
I'd hate to see the day
When evil goes away
And the souls it lies in will never stay
They burn for all eternity
Never to be once set free
The good are all filled with glee
As they are now part of God's family
The burning people shall rot to death
Useless and meaningless was their first breath
Of God's Sweet, Enjoyable Gift of Life
Thank God for those joyful and free from sin
For they won and sit in God's Heaven
Lucky are those who feel no pain,
Yet "God's Children" burn with no life to gain
"It is justifiable punishment," the Mighty Lord claims
They cry and they wail and they ask for forgiveness
Oh, how they ask for eternal death to be painless
But this loving punishment is righteous and just
So killing them eternally is certainly a must
They wish for help but it never comes
Their arms stretched, reaching for a desired home
But they cannot reach it for they must have wings
They should have been good
But  love hurts and it stings
They hear laughter from the heavens above
They know now that they will never feel God's love
This is peace, the Holy Spirit, God's Holy White Dove
Someone save them, save them from this tyranny
Save them from God's "Loving Mercy"
But no one can stand up to God's rule
Cry for God's Children
But, then, welcome to God's World
Thank God they chose to sin
Welcome to God's World
Where you can "win"

If You Come Softly by Audre Lorde

I am a fan of poetry and other writings, but I don't think I'm as good as a lot of other people. I wanted to share a piece that I had found in a book by Jacqueline Woodson. The book is also entlitled If you come softly. I found the poem to be sweet so here it is:

 

If you come softly by Audre Lorde


If you come softly
  as the wind within the trees
You may hear what I hear
  See what sorrow sees
And if you come I will be silent
  Nor speak harsh words to you
I will not ask you why now,
  Or how, or what you do.
We shall sit here, softly
  Beneath two different years
And the rich earth between us
 Shall drink our tears.

Friday, October 18, 2013

Trial

Since I am new to blogging, I think I will try out different topics and different styles of writing. I never really show people my short stories (most of which are never finished),  or poems, so I will share one in this post.
This came from a little article I read in a writing magazine. I don't necessarily remember what the style was called, but for now I'll call it a "flash poem" (like flash fiction), not that it rhymed or anything. The article was about how a man had killed a priest because he found out his wife was cheating on him with this "holy" man.
 This was my response to the article:

 Title: Trial

 "How do you find him?"
 I grew impatient...
 Boiling with growing hatred.
 It was like losing consciousness.
 Losing concentration.
 It's hard to think
 What happened?
 Had I truly killed him?
 The priest...I'm a murderer
 A murderer in the face of God
 I thought about it: I was relieved, rather.
 "We find the defendant guilty...Your Honor..."
 They were taking me away
 But I was in a whole 'nother world
 By myself...
 And I menacing...chuckled to myself...

 I wanted to make the story shorter but I guess that didn't really work. I wanted at least in the sixties. But I wanted to get into his head so.......Anyway, I was pretty satisfied with this. Thank you for reading :-)